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Jacky Hawker's avatar

Enjoyed chapter 1 thanks. Keen to receive next chapter

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Steve Fendt's avatar

Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it 😊😊

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Peter Jacobson's avatar

Good start, thanks

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Steve Fendt's avatar

Thanks for commenting, Peter! Glad you enjoyed it.

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Susan's avatar

Good read, I wonder what next?

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Steve Fendt's avatar

Thanks Susan 😊 Glad you enjoyed it!

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CarolynH's avatar

I listened to this on the podcast version while I was having lunch today. Let's say I enjoyed it a lot more than reading The Australian newspaper! Well done, Steve.

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Salima Noorani's avatar

I enjoyed reading it, Steve 👏👏👏💝💝💝This brought back the memory of the time I dislocated my kneecap. Its a funny story how it happened but the experience was very painful. Spent few hours in ER. Had to walk few weeks with knee immobilizer.

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Steve Fendt's avatar

Thank you, Salima! And ... ouch!! You’ve got me wondering about this funny story now 🤔

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Lea Kilby's avatar

Your style of writing is very engaging. I want to read more, and I want to read it now!

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Steve Fendt's avatar

Thanks, Lea! I'm afraid you'll have to wait until Tuesday to find out how Hannah and Jay get on 😊. In the meantime, you'll find other of my stories here: https://medium.com/@steve-on-corio-bay and here: https://coriobay.blog

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Geoffrey Gevalt's avatar

Enjoyed this. Enjoyed the audio, too. Have you thought of getting the audio onto this page, too? I am someone who likes to see the words as I listen. (Not while driving, of course, but... :)

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Steve Fendt's avatar

Thanks Geoffrey! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the suggestion also. I'll give it some thought …

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