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Feb 2, 2022Liked by Steve Fendt

Well remember"car shuffles" at either end of track from days with Geelong BushWalkers. Sounding good Steve, don't envy her hike out with a bung knee. Bring on Chaper 2 ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Feb 2, 2022ยทedited Feb 2, 2022Liked by Steve Fendt

Loved the descriptive detail, Steve. Iโ€™m trying to work out which part of the Otways youโ€™ve located this story in. Hmmm, Athena Bay - by Zeus! Iโ€™m thinking Greek mythology! ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‰

I winced when Jay referred to Hannah as โ€˜Babeโ€™. I laughed out loud (how do you abbreviate that - LtOL?!) when we discovered she hates the pet name! I do too!

I listened to the story at 1.25x speed. That was comfortable for me. The audio was very clear.

Great opening chapter. Looking forward to the next instalment. ๐Ÿ‘โœจ๐Ÿ™

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