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Well remember"car shuffles" at either end of track from days with Geelong BushWalkers. Sounding good Steve, don't envy her hike out with a bung knee. Bring on Chaper 2 👏👏

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Cheers Lyn, thanks for listening in 😊

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Loved the descriptive detail, Steve. I’m trying to work out which part of the Otways you’ve located this story in. Hmmm, Athena Bay - by Zeus! I’m thinking Greek mythology! 🤔😉

I winced when Jay referred to Hannah as ‘Babe’. I laughed out loud (how do you abbreviate that - LtOL?!) when we discovered she hates the pet name! I do too!

I listened to the story at 1.25x speed. That was comfortable for me. The audio was very clear.

Great opening chapter. Looking forward to the next instalment. 👏✨🙏

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😄 I deliberately avoided a specific location so I don’t get any lawsuits (you’ll see why by the end). But think inland of Wye River, where the forest is dense and there are very few roads. Glad the audio was okay, if a little slow, as I have a tendency to mumble. Thanks for the encouraging feedback 🙏

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Yep, a big lump of nothing but dense bush in that part of the world.

Sounds like you have quite an adventure in store for us!

I've done a similar thing with the location for my WIP novel - mine is loosely set on the Mornington Peninsula but the places and landmarks don't actually exist - exercising my literary freedoms to make sh*t up! LOL!!

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